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Burning Tears


Have you ever seen a tear
descending a lover's face
Hell rain-drop
tearing through his skin
Digging Tunnels
of undying grief
Scars of a cruel rejection

A bleak painting
drawn with a jagged blade
upon the innocent face
A face that never hated
Never deceived
and yet it got slapped
So many times
By pitiless hands

A single tear
Is now a flow
Burning
Eating that face
That only hoped for love
Until it left nothing
But a smoking ash
Twisted into one word
Left for the world to hear
Why?
 

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Login to find out (May 27, 2006 at 7:58pm)
I love you poem ... it takes an interesting look at violence an d love as connected quantities ... very interesting ... I have posted a very short poem on drops that I wrote ....
 
Login to find out (March 29, 2006 at 7:40pm)
ha. yeah this village seems a little quiet...anyway, keep up the good work.
 
Login to find out (March 29, 2006 at 6:47pm)
thank u soooooo much...u r the only one commenting on my poems ! lol...looks like i got a fan!! i promise to post more if u like...
 
Login to find out (March 29, 2006 at 11:53am)
excellent