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Dark lights


Dark lights...

Switch off the lights when u leave?
I don?t need them anymore..
Let me be with myself now, please
And don?t turn around when u reach that door
I don?t want to remember that one last smile
Or those two half-fallen tears in ur eyes?
Coz in love,for every moment of ecstacy or pain
Every lover has to pay the price?.

This darkened room is better than all those lights
Which desert u when u need them the most
The image of you looking at me with such love
Will haunt me forever like a ghost?
Just leave and forget me like the dreams
A dream which has no beginning or end
Dreams, so weak at the seams
Stories written on water,Castles made out of sand?.

Switch off the lights when u leave?.
I don?t need them anymore?
No one will open this door ever again??..

written by me...Sameer
 

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Login to find out (June 15, 2005 at 7:23pm)
great imagery, an honest voice.... i liked the line cheemy mentioned below as well.... iA someone will open that door again ;-)
 
Login to find out (June 15, 2005 at 2:37pm)
great poem..

the imagery really got accross the feeling well...

i liked:

"This darkened room is better than all those lights
Which desert u when u need them the most"

sometimes light can leave one deserted.. at least the dark provides anonymity and shelter from sight..