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Dreams..let go !


I had them in all shades ?.
Soft greens and earthy hues?..
Ochre and Orange ones to choose!!
Some with a hint of pink?.passionate reds and dreamy blues!!
Brilliant golden and silver ones?.too!

They were mine?laced with tender thoughts?.and detailed with fire
Dreams? Dreams which made me crave for life then!
Dreams? Dreams which make me seek death today!
Dreams?of a lifetime of togetherness!
Dreams?.of a lifetime of love
Dreams ..eternal?.Dreams ..so very real

Dreams ?bleeding.. Dreams dead
Dreams ?disguised?dreams fake
Dreams ..cruel?and Dreams sad

Go away! For I don?t need u today
You were never mine Always a dream?always a mirage
Leave me?for I want to live
Live without a dream?.!!!
 

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Login to find out (October 3, 2005 at 11:58pm)
Thank you very much for your words ! Yes dreams are wat we live for to start with, followed by the struggle to achieve them, failures, new dreams and the cycle goes on ...naa-umeedi kufr hai !
Yes I do get Urdu Alhamdolillah..hum bhi ehl-e-zabaaN hain. Khwaab adhoore hi sahi..khwaab humare to hain..hmmm..."maloom huaa humko jabb door hueen humse..yaaden bhi parayee theen..jagir naa theen apni" ...umeed hai..khwaab apne hi rahen.
 
Login to find out (October 3, 2005 at 8:41pm)
it's the dreams that allow us to live in the first place .
love the way you've put them in all their vibrance and described the great multitudes of them. really good job.
Don't know if you get Urdu, but
Khwaab adhuray saheeh, khwab hamaray tho hain- Junoon