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Manzar Bhopali


judaaii ho ke milan har adaa hamaarii hai
tumhaaraa shahar hai lekin fizaa hamaarii hai

shikaayaten bhii karen ham to kis zabaan se karen
Khudaa banaayaa ham ne ye Khataa hamaarii hai

hamaare jism kii uriyaanat pe mat haNsanaa
ke tum jo orhe hue ho vo ridaa hamaarii hai

hamaare saamane zebaa nahii.n Guruur tumhen
jahaaN pe baiThe ho tum vo jagaa hamaarii hai
 

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Login to find out (November 18, 2005 at 7:42am)
shukreya to you both but im sure Bhopali would tell me ke

"hamaare saamane zebaa nahiin Guruur tumhen
jahaaN pe baiThe ho tum vo jagaa hamaarii hai"

as this amazing shayare is his!
canadian hero thanks for reminding me of that last sher. I had heard it for a long time and so really enjoyed reading it again.
 
Login to find out (November 18, 2005 at 4:49am)
Jahan Pai Tum Baithai Hoo Woh Jagha Hamari Hai Wah Wah Kia Kehnai
 
Login to find out (November 17, 2005 at 7:07pm)
Saeqa sahiba...manzar sb ke chand ashaar yeh bhi dekhiye


Ek naya mor dete huye phir fasana badal dijiye
Ya to khud hi badal jaiye ya zamana badal dijiye
humko pala tha jis per ne uske patte hi dushman huye
keh rahi hain kati daaliyan aashiyana badal dijiye
Sheher mein sar uthaye huye ghar humare bahut hain abhi
Masjidein to khandar ho chukeen ab nishana badal dijiyue