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Kuchh kehne ki koshish ki hai...

Hijr ki tamam shab uski hijabon mein guzri
Aankhein khuli theen aur khawabon mein guzri.

Rehti thi bahaar jiske dum se Chaman mein
Ab to woh shaam bhi khizaon mein guzri

Rukh pe zulfein hain jaise ghataon mein chandni
Jaise ke zindagi mahtaab ki naqabon mein guzri

Taskeen mein tha adab na thi tum me haya
Phir kyoon shub-e-wasl hijabon mein gurzi?

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ohh bro i was just kidding:)

vo ahad ahad hii kyaa jise nibhaao bhii
hamaare vaadaa e ulfat ko bhuul jaao bhii

bhalaa kahaaN ke ham aise gumaan vaale hain
hazaar baar ham aayen hamen bulaao bhii

biga D chalaa hai bahut rasmeKhudkushii kaa chalan
Daraane vaalo kisii roz kar dikhaao bhii

tumhaarii niind men Duubii huii aaNkhon kii qasam
hamen ye zid hai ki jaago bhii aur jagaao bhii

mein samaj gaya tha ke taskeen shair ka naam hai....i just read it wrong..and it wasn't making sense....now it is..... :)

Saeqa sahiba, aapki pazeerai ka mamnoon-o-mashkoor hoon shukriya

Mashallah bohot alla sher likha hai aap ne...well done!

Nice
Bhai quantum Taskeen shayar ka nam hay umeed hay abb app koo samjh a gayi hoo gee

ret par likh ke meraa naam miTaayaa na karo
aaNkhen sach bolatii hain pyaar chupaayaa na karo

log har baat kaa afsaana banaa lete hain
sab ko haalaat kii rudaad sunaayaa na karo

ye zaruurii nahiin har shaKhs masiihaa hi ho
pyaar ke zaKhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo

shahare-ehasaas men pattharaav bahut hain Mohsin
dil ko shiishe ke jharonkhon me sajaayaa na karo

Shukriya Quantum, pazeerayee ka bahut mamnoon hoon.....Taskeen takhallus hai Bhai.

ek martaba phir se shukriya

bahut achi ghazal hai....
last sher ke pehle misre ki kuch mjhe samaj nahi aaiii...
Taskeen mein tha adab ??

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Meri ek Ghazal

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Village Journals

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