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My First Love


My first day with you,
Another heart I needed to love you more.
As lovely as an emerald glow,
Your tinsel face beaconed my sorrow.
In my heart garden, I planted your memories
And watered it with careful cries;
This World is clumsy to cope with haste
The Price of truth
and it's bitter taste.
All my way with your memories,
The thirst of my love pained my throat
And inhaled the breeze
That touched your heart.
Love gets multiplied,
When there is a distance
And I live,
To suffer and think of you.
 

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Login to find out (August 27, 2005 at 4:13pm)
I think thats the test...we have feelings, and we are tested as to how to react to them. For example, giving up love, not letting anger get to you, controlling hate, etc. CHeck out "Purification of the Heart" by Hamza Yusuf, its pretty good on how to deal with emotions, and his book is based on the old works of Imam Ghazali. Once you can master your heart, nothing can phase you.One example. If you are envious of someone, pray for them. That will remove the envy. Anyways, the soul can be relaxed but taking small steps such as these. At this time I am also plugging my blog: sweetdemotion.blogspot.com
check out the article " Oh, its never enough".
 
Login to find out (August 26, 2005 at 3:34pm)
Thx dude...
 
Login to find out (August 26, 2005 at 2:38pm)
well man I can easily identify with that...the only thing I can say is the last love is the more important...thats who stays with you until the end. I know it can suck, unfotunately there's no other option but to just let it go.