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"Ode to Laziness"


Yesterday I felt as if my ode
was never going to sprout.
At least it should
have been showing
a green leaf.
I scratched the soil: "Come up,
sister ode,"
I said,
"I promised to produce you,
don't be afraid of me,
I'll not step on your
four leaves, your
four hands, ode,
we'll have tea together.
Come up
and I'll crown you first among my odes
we'll go to the seashore
on our bicycles."
It was useless.

Then,
high amid the pines,
I saw lovely
naked laziness,
she led me off bedazzled
and bemused,
she showed me on the sand
small broken bits
of marine matter,
driftwood, seaweed, stones,
seabirds' feathers.
I hunted but did not find
yellow agates.
The sea
surged higher,
crumbling towers,
invading
the shoreline of my homeland,
sending forth
successive catastrophes of foam.
A solitary corolla
cast a ray
against the sand.
I saw silvery petrels cruising
and, like black crosses,
cormorants
clinging to the rocks.
I freed a bee from
its death throes in a spiderweb,
I put a pebble
in my pocket,
it was smooth, as smooth
as a bird's breast,
meanwhile along the coast
all afternoon,
sun and fog waged war.
At times
the fog glowed
with
a topaz light,
other times
a moist sun cast
rays dripping yellow drops.

That night,
thinking of the duties of my
elusive ode,
I took of my shoes
beside the fire,
sand spilled from them
and soon I was falling
fast asleep.
 

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Login to find out (June 13, 2005 at 12:23am)
I was too lazy to consider the threshold of laziness beyond which I'd be too lazy to write an ode to laziness... But then, perhaps if I'd met laziness on a beach and watched sun and fog waging war, I may have stopped and chatted for a little while :)
 
Login to find out (June 12, 2005 at 9:56am)
i was too lazy to write an ode about laziness
 
Login to find out (June 11, 2005 at 7:41pm)
Ahhh, he even makes laziness sound beautiful.