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Random Ramblings past Midnight


forgive me?

wandering in the endless fields of glee
i once saw a beautiful tree
that awakened the sleeping poet in me
to write a poem for the eternal Thee

but then i had no time to make the words rhyme

and now i am buried under the dirt you see
with nothing but tears rolling down from me
regreting the time i found not time for Thee
while wandering in those endless fields of glee
 

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Login to find out (March 12, 2006 at 7:49pm)
thanks.... you guys are too kind. : )

though i don't post too many comments, i must say that you guys are much more amazing! keep up the good work!

let your spirit roar free.
 
Login to find out (March 10, 2006 at 4:46pm)
short but sweet
 
Login to find out (June 10, 2005 at 11:16pm)
thanks :)
 
Login to find out (May 11, 2005 at 3:26am)
Mashallah, I wish my past midnight rambling could produce something like the above :p