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Romantic Desi Guys Showcase


Ladies, you?ve recently started an inquiry in this village about whether Desi Men are truly romantic. You may call me biased as a man, but I maintain that many desi men are romantic.

That?s why I have dedicated this journal to fellow desi men who are romantic; to post romantic works and stories.

Men: Don?t tell the ladies what you ?would? do. Talk is cheap. You don?t ever have to have been married/involved to post here, but you need a true story or a rendition of (or link to) romantic artistry ? a poem, photography etc.

As the fellow who started this JE, I have already demonstrated my romantic gesture and have done my posting :)

I leave the rest of the entries to be made here for my fellow desi brothers to showcase their work and for you ladies to ponder the romantics that virtually walk amongst you.

To begin, I would like to showcase a translation of Kabhi Kabhi done many years ago by my recent online chum, RoadNotTaken:


Sometimes I dream with open eyes,
that you have been created for me.
You were dwelling in the heavens above,
You were sent to the world for me.

Sometimes I dream with open eyes
that your body, the glittering of your eyes is mine,
the shade of your curling locks is for me to enjoy,
the sweetness of your lips, the refuge of your arms belong to me.

Your hand in my hand, I will conquer destiny
Luck will surrender if you are along in this journey.
You may or may not answer my cries, my love,
The "Yes" in your silence is worth a thousand words to me.

Sometimes I dream with open eyes
that you will love me for eternity.
Your heart will keep me dear forever,
These eyes will always adore me.

I know, you are not mine, but still
Sometimes I dream with open eyes...

Sometimes I dream with open eyes?

That life would have been great
If I had spent it under the dark shadows of your hair.

All of this anguish and toils of my heart may have
Evaporated in the glittering of your eyes.

But this never happened, this never happened.
Now not you, nor your love, nor your desire
Can bring me back...

I have no path, no destination, nor a ray of light to follow
My life is wondering through the ultimate darkness as if
It does not even need the reliance of a companion.

I know, I will be lost in these shadows, forever
But still, some times I dream with open eyes...


Isn?t that beautiful ladies? It does exist. We just are very selective with whom we share. Luckily, with our art, you may catch a glimpse of the romantic souls desi men do possess.
 

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Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 5:12pm)
LOL, i saw your new entry.

Yes it's like Mr. Magoo....he'sh sho cute.
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 2:59pm)
Yup, that's Aamers nick name. Don't get too close to him, cuz he chipkufies, and it's hard to get him off.

T- is the only poor sould without a name. Let's call him Mr. Ladoo
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 2:30pm)
That's my stage name though.
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 2:18pm)
Bleeeeeeeech, is so sweeeeeeet ;)
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 1:41pm)
Wait a second! Bleeeech what do you mean by wifey material? Are you associating desi desserts with one of chores a wifey is supposed to hook his man up with?

My husband Inshallah who ever that may be will get to eat lots of cake. Breakfast-cake, lunch-cake, dinner- cake, dessert- crackers.
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 1:38pm)
Hatin out of love? I think that's where you men go wrong! You can't do that to a girl, and expect her to love you back cuz you were actually trying to be lovin, while hatin. Just love out of love, and then you'll get the lovin back.

Bleeeech...I absolutely love Ras malai. I'm not really into desi desserts but i can't resist these.
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 8:21am)
got it - I'm having a dyslexic week....sheeeeesh - boys (shaking my head)
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 4:03am)
A little less fattening still makes desi women a lot more fattening. Affi, we only hate out of love.
 
Login to find out (August 12, 2005 at 2:41am)
What is wrong with you boys and hatin on gulab jamuns????? I just don't get it. Once again...i did squeze out the juice to make them a little less fattening. I thought you would be impressed with my sensitivity to keeping fit, but I guess not. MEN..Agggghhhh!!!
 
Login to find out (August 11, 2005 at 10:49pm)
do I have to be a guy to understand what the hell you're talking about??
 
Login to find out (August 11, 2005 at 1:14pm)
ewwwww
 
Login to find out (August 11, 2005 at 1:00pm)
BakraBuster-veery, veery nishe!

I just ate 3 gulab jamuns for breakfast. They were sooooo yummy. Betta than those jelly donuts. I heated them up, and don't worry i squeaked out all the sugar syrup before I devoured.
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 9:27pm)
Where's the Kabhi Kabhi romantic poetry? You guys are talking about donuts??!!! LOL
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 6:13pm)
I'm so glad that someone appreciates my posts.... I will gladly wear that gold star!!
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 5:37pm)
I'm confused again.... have to lay off the midday margaritas.....
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 5:25pm)
Good!
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 5:17pm)
Mpg, it's waiting!
Tan, wasn't spanking my butt enough for you? You're so selfish!
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 4:54pm)
Ya okay...............ill believe it when i see it!!!
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 4:25pm)
*disclaimer, the previous comment was for village entry purposes only.
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2005 at 4:24pm)
ok fine, actually , the bite is wrapped in a tiffany box, which is placed on a bed, surrounded by rose petals and candles. there's hot water running in the bath tub and your bath should be ready when you're done with your bite. while you take your hot bath, i would have a plate of milk and cookies next to your bath for you to enjoy, and i would give you a shoulder rub while you relax since you've probably had a hard, busy day being the strong, independent, ambitious woman you are. now i just want to give you a little peice of heaven like you give me everyday of my life by just being in it.