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Pen speaking with its leaking
left alone but in need of tweaking
hurt thrice with no one believing
hey, I need a reason

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Running backwards to a special eye
look forward and dont ask why
its that kid that quotes catcher in the rye
write a novel about me weeping
is that a reason?

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Leaves, that fall and die
well, just die

Dont they?

Maybe suggestion is left right in its discourse
and wrong in its remorse
a coin I had to toss
then they hanged me for treason

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Login to find out (September 23, 2005 at 10:06pm)
imagine if you could write for a living...no schedule, no hours, no deadline, you wake up and write as you please...not to say i write well enough to live that type of life style but that would be the ideal life for me...just sitting back waiting for something to hit you and have the time and energy to write about it....its hard to find the time nowadays to really sit back and try to capture yourself with words when all your energy is being consumed by your job....anyway keep writing you never know it might be your ticket out of all this
 
Login to find out (September 23, 2005 at 1:16am)
I write on the spot..some are old ones but even those were written on the spot. To be honest its just for release, I haven't even read any poets..I mean I have shakespeare and edgar alan poes poems..but I haven't read them yet..so I dont know how I measure up to them or seamus heany, etc. Getting better? I dont know man..I just have feelings and writing deals with them..and helps convey them without giving away my personal life..lol no I dont write for a living, unfortunately I'm a computer science nerd!!!
 
Login to find out (September 22, 2005 at 10:11pm)
i dont know if your posting them as you finish writing them but you seem to get better with each post...what is it that you do...do you write for a living?...very impressive