thanks again man. You're right, I hate it too when they say it is whatever you think. To be frank of course there is something behind it..but sometimes I cant put a finger on it myself..I think its the ambiguity of it all..you know? other times its personal stuff which I dont want to share with the world. Check out all my poems at
demotion.blogspot.com

if you want....no one visits my sites man!!!

incredible poem...honestly you seem to get better with each posting...and i agree with kayo...i mean i enjoy reading these poems but i find the thought processs behind each poem much more fascinating than the poem itself...i hate it when a writer says it is what it is to the reader...and im not that great reading in between the lines so i really learn to appreciate something once i know what it means...your poems are also great in a sense that they initiate very interesting topics for discussion....maybe one day my kids will read this in an english class and spend an entire college semester analyzing it

this life you see isn't real. In reality our souls are just fed perceptions, and this has been scientifically proven.Theres another topic that time doesn't exist in reality, its also a perception, which is why "it feels like yesterday" type comments come out. If you want to check this stuff out, check out Harun Yahya's stuff.Its not jsut a "muslim view" scientisits actually agree with this. Your detachment from the world, is a good thing because its a more realistic view. Your whole life on earth is literally a moment..not just a saying, it actually is one moment.

Life as I see it is a constant liminal state. I for one always see life as it passes me by, and I'm barely ever in it. Seem removed from it, always analyzing it and not being able to enjoy the moment at all. Probably kill myself and i won't even know it one day.
Yes it's a long topic, worth discussion. We should create a separate village to discuss the Poetry and the thoughts behind it on Poetry COrner.

thanks a lot..u know the weird thing is our whole life is a dream anyway. I guess thats another topic, but dont you feel like sometimes you're nt really there and things aren;t happening? I mean I know its all a perception, and only the soul exists, but its interesting the dreams we have and our waking dream. I guess this is a long topic, but yeah, thanks of the comments.

Assuming that this is based on the very vivid dreams that take place during REM sleep, this is probably the best description I've ever read of our dreams and how they unleash the subconcious and all the hopes and fears in it upon unsuspecting souls like ourselves.