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"" tu main yadd aoon ga.....


wasi shah is a great recent addition in urdu poetry....

i just love his few lines...

...merey bakhat kee siyahee bhee shamil hey iss main

...tum siya rang jo pehnoo gay tu main yadd aoon ga

some how his lines made me to write few of mine...

....abb key baar
....bahar kee surmaeee sham main
....khunk hawa tumharey
....shanooo ko chooo ker
....jo guzrey gee
....tu main yadd aoon gaaaa........

GOd bless u all.....
 

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Login to find out (April 4, 2006 at 7:43am)
Itnee hai sirf meri muhabbat kee daastaaN
Ik meherbaan zakhm-e-shanasaai de gaya
 
Login to find out (March 30, 2006 at 11:12am)
Wasi shah sb ka ek aur sher

ab tere ashk main honTon se churaa letaa hooN
haath se Khud inhein ponchhoge to yaad aaoonga
 
Login to find out (March 25, 2006 at 10:25pm)
meray moala nay mujhay chahatoun ki sultanat day di
magar pehli mohabat ka khasara sath rehta hay
 
Login to find out (March 23, 2006 at 10:31am)
mery talab tha ek shaks woh jo nahin mila tu phir
hath duwa say youn gira bhool gaya sawal bhi
 
Login to find out (March 22, 2006 at 7:36pm)
well....thankx for correcting shah's sher as that was not of mine....ya i know i did move few of his words from here to there but i em sure he wud t mind it becose he writes so good n this is so wonderful that ppl went back to urdu poetry after he started writting good romantic pieces after amjad islam amjad.

tc
 
Login to find out (March 22, 2006 at 4:44pm)
bahut hi umda likha hai aapne....english mein kehte hain "Short and Sweet"
lijiye kisi aur ne aapki hi terha yeh bhi kaha hai



na aawaaz de kar
na jhinjhoR kar..
jagaataa tha mujh ko
hameshaa hi woh...
miree band aankhoN
ko bas choom kar


Wasi Shah ka hi ek sher hai ummmeeed hai aapko pasand aayega.....

tumhin ne ham ko sunaya na apna dukh varna
dua woh karte ke ham aasmaan hila dete

agar giran na guzre to aapka sher sahi kiye deta hoon

is mein shaamil hai meri baKht ki tariki bhi
tum siyaah rang jo pahnoge to yaad aaoonga