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Waqt Guzar Raha Hai Tezi Say!


Man....waqt itni tez guzar raha hai aaj kal! I wish I could stop the clock! I can barely find time to login! :)

Hai koi shair ya gaana kisi kay paas 'waqt' pay? I need it!

:)
 

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Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 1:22pm)
jinab...agar yeh baat hay to phir....hum sub roz aapko encourage karain gay:)
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 1:11pm)
Shukriya! :)

See all I need is a little encouragement....phir dekhain aap.....kaisay main shair likhta hon! LOL!

:)
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 1:10pm)
Funny you mention that waqt tezi sai guzar raha hai. I was learning JUST yesterday at a lecture that one of the signs of the day of Qiyamat is that time becomes less and less (decades become years, years become months, months become weeks, weeks become days, days become hours....etc.....)

btw.......mera kyal hai jokai aap ko urdu main gana yahan shair chaihai?! :P
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 1:02pm)
My bad Icekool,
Your shair was a nice comeback to my writing.....good job...you will be a pro in no time:)
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 10:52am)
Accha....tou what about my shair Koji-haseena? You didn't like that? Come on.....as a rookie I need encouragement!

(H)

j/k
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 10:44am)
Almafia
Its not big deal Bro, now that we are all cool and calm, what i had written was actually supposed to be a compliment for you...:)
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 9:26am)
O Blimey!, Acchaa, mera ganda (my bad) ... hamse baree maazirat qabool ho :)
 
Login to find out (April 9, 2006 at 12:46am)
almafia, bro...you took the humor wrong way.....dats all i am gonna say:)

Just to give you a hint....my sons name is Syed-Aiyen-a-Ali....i myself am a follower of Haidri....i didnt mean any offense there..so pardon me
 
Login to find out (April 8, 2006 at 11:17pm)
Please cut it out you two. Shake hands and make up :)
 
Login to find out (April 8, 2006 at 11:14pm)
Koji what's that's supposed to mean??? :# Non-islamic shers are not my preferance, agreed. But I can do mawlai shers very well.

Now if that's not your cup-of-tea... too bad. Just like I find pyar/mehbooba shers too corny and redundant. :D
 
Login to find out (April 8, 2006 at 3:09pm)
Almafia:
I think brother.."Nara-e-Haideri" suits you better......Saheree aapkay bus ka kaam nahi:)

nice try though
 
Login to find out (April 8, 2006 at 12:59pm)
Very corny sher, but someone might like it...

Larki boli:
Chaandni chaand se hoti he, sitaroN se nahi
Dosti ek(1) se hoti he, hazaroN(1000s) se nahi

Larka bola:
Chaandni gar ek se hoti he, to sitaroN ka kya hoga
Dosti ek(1) se hoti he, to hazaroN ka kya hoga
 
Login to find out (April 8, 2006 at 12:03am)
Haa haa haa! :)

Banaya hai hum yeh Urdu Club....
Ta kay is main aaen members ab..
Aur aa kay sikhaein humain vo sab..
Jo nahin seekhay hum nay abhi udab!

:)
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 9:50pm)
Naam rakaha hay is village ka "Urdu_club"
Shaan-a-khudawandee to daykho...
Mujh say poochtay hay kiya hay mutlub"dhaalta"ka
Ub kiya may in ko tashreeh bataoon yaro...
Jub khud inko maloom he nahi kiya hay "Urdu_udub".
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 12:01pm)
Mustaqbil ka aik sheir hai :)

Muhabbat karney waley kam nah hoongey,
Teiree mehfil mein laikin hum nah hooongey :)
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 10:35am)
WEll love/pyar shayeri is not my specialty... I'm more into funny humorous shayeri... but I can throw some lines as welll

Khuda kissi ko kissi pe fidaa na kare
Agar hojaye to Qayamat tak juda na kare!
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 10:11am)
Kadam Kadam Par Baharon Ne Sath Chod Diya,
Pada Jab Wakt To Apno Ne Sath Chod Diya.
Kasam Kaii Thi Is Sitaron Ne, Sath Dene Ki ,
Subah Hote Hi Sitaron Ne Bhi Sath Chod Diya.
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 9:48am)
dhaaalta - to transform or change into, cast into, to shape into, to frame into etc.
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 8:44am)
Vaa Vaa Vaa! Kiya baat hai yaaron! You guys are making me go into this deep reflective mode yaar! :)

Koji-haseena, what does 'dhaaalta' mean?
 
Login to find out (April 7, 2006 at 7:33am)
Ay waqt too goozurta ja
din ko raat, raat ko din may budulta ja
Itnee haseeen nahi hay mayree Daastan-a-waqt;
Jo tujh ko boloon thum ja
Ankh khlutay he dil kehta hay....
Ay Waqt.... juldee ker..
Mayray aaj ko kul.. kul ko aaaj may dhaaalta ja.