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X rated?


X rated?

After a real long romantic foreplay, she and he sought their way to bed with a sea of looks full of love and hugs and so on?she lost herself in him and he did too?He did not have the slightest clue of what was about to happen?a sweet and romantic guy like him would only expect his lovely wife to totally surrender to his needs at this point?Well, she did not!! She pushed him when he tried to take off her top. Now, he tried nicely to take off her top, but still, his trial to live up the romance only scratched a deep wound in her soul. She started crying. The bitter type of crying?She could feel her tears burn her cheeks. He could feel them too. He caressed her skin, wiped her tears in the back of his finger, and kissed her forehead whispering: ?I guess he did not do that, did he??. She held his arm real close to her heart, and he watched her fall asleep. She knew how to sleep peacefully only when she married him. She felt she's not X rated in this world anymore.


I finally got the chance to write this?I?m not sure if I was scared to write it? This is not a true story at all. I would only imagine how a raped woman would live her romantic life. We?d all wish she?d be just normal. Anyway, I think what I want to say is, please open your minds and souls to such issue?I feel that our society always thinks sex is a taboo. Even when females is sexually abused, raped or even battered they?d still be blamed for what happens to them?Not fair and it breaks my heart every time I learn about one raped woman.

If you like this story take it..and you dont have to quote me on it although it's entirely mine. I'd like this to touch as many as possible.
 

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Login to find out (September 8, 2006 at 12:17pm)
sorry for being inresponsive. i guess i write and i forget what i wrote. Nouran this is your personal openion and i respect it, but I should say I'm so glad to see 3 others disagree with you. Maybe you dont have a sense of creative writing which is fine - it's not for everyone. It doesnt matter who rapped her, but you understood that she was rapped and that's my whole point. Rape does scar a woman's heart and whoever comes in into her world, should understand this :)
 
Login to find out (June 14, 2006 at 7:10am)
I know this is an old post but couldn't help but notice the last negative comment. I think this was a powerful start of expression. Kudos to you Birds_Watcher. Expression of the heart is what is so valuable and important as writing. Keep it up!
 
Login to find out (January 9, 2006 at 6:26pm)
I didn't really think this was well written...
Who rapped HER?
 
Login to find out (January 3, 2006 at 10:48pm)
aawww :(
 
Login to find out (December 8, 2005 at 12:51am)
well written.