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you are hidden from me


THE AWAKENING

In the early dawn of happiness
you gave me three kisses
so that I would wake up
to this moment of love

I tried to remember in my heart
what I?d dreamt about
during the night
before I became aware
of this moving
of life

I found my dreams
but the moon took me away
It lifted me up to the firmament
and suspended me there
I saw how my heart had fallen
on your path
singing a song

Between my love and my heart
things were happening which
slowly slowly
made me recall everything

You amuse me with your touch
although I can?t see your hands.
You have kissed me with tenderness
although I haven?t seen your lips
You are hidden from me.

But it is you who keeps me alive

Perhaps the time will come
when you will tire of kisses
I shall be happy
even for insults from you
I only ask that you
keep some attention on me.
 

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Login to find out (March 22, 2006 at 7:57pm)
Ahhh thanks Hiddensmiles! I used to have that link before I lost it.

Appreciate it!
 
Login to find out (March 22, 2006 at 7:09pm)
Found it.
www.khamush.com
 
Login to find out (March 22, 2006 at 3:32pm)
Irfani-I have loads of poems saved on my computer...but I'm sure I can find it for you online somewhere.
 
Login to find out (March 21, 2006 at 6:04pm)
Where did you find the poem? What website, etc? I lost my Favorites/Bookmarks.
 
Login to find out (March 21, 2006 at 3:52pm)
rosegold, very good way of putting it!
 
Login to find out (March 21, 2006 at 3:52pm)
Irfani-no problem at all sharing a poem i can lose myself in. :) Glad you liked it.
 
Login to find out (March 20, 2006 at 8:29pm)
Takes you to another place dosn't it! I adore this poem. you feel a rush of so many emotions all at once.
 
Login to find out (March 20, 2006 at 8:17pm)
Oh this is a WONDERFUL poem! Thanks for sharing!